Last night I finally finished running through the entire script for the first time. Most editing on this pass was just cursory copy editing and that sort of thing as well as correcting awful prose that was writting during NaNoWriMo. There's probably some more story editing that needs to be done, but at this point, the script first draft is presentable. About half of the VN-specific markups are presented (basically character entry/exit) while the art and sound tags are unused.
On the art front, PentagonBuddy has some uniform designs sketched out but is without a scanner. Expect art in the next update.